Banner Ad - Opinions needed!

[Hungry eyes 6]

Hey guys,

 

Andy has asked me to produce a couple of banner ads to put up on TruePCGaming and a few of other sites for free display (or very cheap adspace).

 

Here's my first hack at it

 

 

I really need some thoughts/improvements/opinions/ideas from the PCGW community to either make this ad better, or come up with something different.

 

Any and all ideas would be useful.

[Andytizer 269]

This is now implemented: http://truepcgaming.com/

 

There is a small typo though - 'its'.

 

Also open to other banner suggestions too :).